What I'm Not. - Comments

Hey hey hey!!!
Why does this plotline sounds so familiar??


Gosh, this story is rad.

cool. Pm me.

[haha, just kidding]

i really like your descriptions
especially
"he decapitated mouse, with its insides spewed everywhere."
... that one is my favorite.
and the way you kind of give a description of his past with out really going into severe detail... you keep it brief, but it still explains his character... thats really good.
not many people can do that.
and i really like this,
you should keep it up.
you're a good writer.
in other words...
cool. PM me.
=]
xx

I loved all the details given in the first chapter. keep it up! *subscribes*

Thank you for the feed back!
More soon.

it was very well written, i loved it.

Baha, I'm guessing noone liked it?
Anyhow, Updation soon.

Hey. I'm Bronte is pretty rad, the author of 'What I'm Not.'
Reviews here, please.
I would adore it if people gave me constructive criticism, and if people gave me real reviews.
Not 'Cool. Pm Me.' That doesn't help me grow as an author, and I would LOVE to grow as an autrhor. People who just like slash? At least let me know you liked it. It makes me sad when my story recieves no comments...anyhow, Comment/Review here.

-Bronte