September 2nd, 2007 at 10:55am
cool. Pm me.
[haha, just kidding]
i really like your descriptions
especially
"he decapitated mouse, with its insides spewed everywhere."
... that one is my favorite.
and the way you kind of give a description of his past with out really going into severe detail... you keep it brief, but it still explains his character... thats really good.
not many people can do that.
and i really like this,
you should keep it up.
you're a good writer.
in other words...
cool. PM me.
=]
xx
Why does this plotline sounds so familiar??
Gosh, this story is rad.