This was a lovely One Shot. It was quite sad but the message was clear. Your descriptions were well written and the story itself was simple. Nothing wrong with simplicity. Good luck on your other stories!
I really enjoyed this. I loved the suspense; her plan was obvious, but yet quiestionable throughout the description of her thoughts. I thought that you used the lyrics perfectly. Great job, I'm going to consider you a winning-threat in this contest. haha. Good luck!