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wow. i am compleatly speechless-in a good way.
and i am glad that little hobo was in it. she needs a voice too!

This was great.
Really.

This was absolutely amazing. The emotion here was phenomenal. All else I can say was that this was a truly amazin story.

My gosh, Mappie, this was amazing.
It was written so beautifully, and I could feel your emotion in it.
It's simple, but that's perfect for the situation.
It made me forget everything else, and I lost myself in it.
Thank you so much for this entry.
Even if everyone else backed out of the challenge, it was worth starting it just for this.

I almost cried reading this. I really hope Ryan and Jon left Panic on a good note, at least. I also hope that they are happy because that'd be horrible if they weren't.

Amazing.

:cute:

this was amazing,I'm with you on the whole Ryan abandoning them. It was kinda a shit thing to do. But if he is happy....

Amazingly written.
So much emotion were greatly described.
I really hope that they'll stay friends after everything.

But throughout the story I couldn't help but think... poor Hobo.

Ahh I love it! this is like the same idea I had about why they split. Just with the whole Ryan changing mostly. Sigghh I wish so much they were still together! Oh well.. Thanks for writing this!

*such as this one.

This was great. Frist one I've seen written on the split. The last bit is something I can relate with, because I do feel angry with both of the sides for what has happened.

You should continue to write more one shots. They can help if you ever feel the need to work on certain aspects or just want to get a strong emotion across, suck as this one.

Nice work.

This was a really good fanfic story, it was sad it almost made me cry, haha, but this was definetly one of the best fanfics I have heard in a while.

This is the only one shot I've read about the break up, and I think it's even the only Panic story I've read since then as well.
I felt that same way about Ryan. The band has inspired me from the first time I heard the time To Dance demo on their PureVolume page, but now...
Panic will never be the same without him and Jon.
Away from the angst now! I loved this! And poor Hobo, being all neglected and stuff, I'm so glad Brendon took her. Great, great job! <3

Oh My God. This is so tragic!
But still, I really loved it, how you described Brendon's anger and all. Also, poor Ryan... Sigh. :(
This is the first one shot I've read since... I don't know. I forgot. And it was worth it. :cute: