Woww so good I like the fact it is showing the other side the daughter being disappointed with the mother instead of the other way round so powerful C=
o_o This is so strong...All your feelings are so well put in this story...Well, when you try to make the reader feel what that character was feeling (I doubt this is a non-fiction) the words you mixed together in such a good way... o_o And no it did not make me cry. You were close, though. XD I don't know about anyone else, but that just ripped my heart out. ~Good job!~
Oh my god! I love it! I mean it was so good! Really I couldn't of amagined it any better. I was wondering about this one. I thought it might be too hard, but you did a bang up job! Ten thumbs up! :)