Mom, I saw you last night - Comments

  • Lacta

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    That was SO GREATLY WRITTEN! It sailed along nicely and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end.
    November 29th, 2009 at 04:55pm
  • Abbi-Girl Ellen

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    Woww so good
    I like the fact it is showing the other side
    the daughter being disappointed with the mother instead of the other way round
    so powerful C=
    September 21st, 2009 at 10:21pm
  • hiyaitsjackie

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    i love this! its soo good! i would just have liked to see like the mothers point of view but this was AMAZING really great job
    September 14th, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • Sarrawrr!:O

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    wow...is all I can really say...
    July 31st, 2009 at 10:42am
  • Raeble

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    Eeehh! thanks bluey~ ^^
    And... not my feelings :P
    AllyCatXandi quote: "I never knew you could ANGST, Rach..."
    July 26th, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • sleepless.in.forks

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    o_o This is so strong...All your feelings are so well put in this story...Well, when you try to make the reader feel what that character was feeling (I doubt this is a non-fiction) the words you mixed together in such a good way... o_o And no it did not make me cry. You were close, though. XD I don't know about anyone else, but that just ripped my heart out. ~Good job!~ Smiley
    July 26th, 2009 at 03:32pm
  • s f

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    Really good story. I liked it a lot.
    July 23rd, 2009 at 03:38am
  • Raeble

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    Yaaayy!! Thankyou!!
    July 9th, 2009 at 05:10am
  • mysocalledundeath

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    Oh my god! I love it! I mean it was so good! Really I couldn't of amagined it any better. I was wondering about this one. I thought it might be too hard, but you did a bang up job! Ten thumbs up! :)
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • Raeble

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    Thank youu~~~ <3
    July 8th, 2009 at 03:23pm
  • Mint_Slice

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    I like.
    A lot.

    :D
    July 8th, 2009 at 02:51pm