July 14th, 2009 at 04:34am
First of all, love, I cannot use any words to express how proud i am of you.
This is incomparable.
This is fucking epic.
You will definitely win this, hands down.
I see it like this...
Gerard Way is two faced.
On one side you have his therapist, helpful character.
On the another... an ugly monster, a pedophile. The one who breaks Frank's trust in him, the one who breaks the family's trust in him.
I love the way you included the elder Frank. Driven by his concern for Frankie, he goes to Gerard Way... the family friend, the one whom he believes will be able to help Frankie. The elder Frank places that faith he has in Gerard to cure his Frankie. Little does he know that Gerard was the one responsible for what Frankie has become... and to protect his secret, to fufill his desires, he has been misusing that trust...
And Frank. Wow, i don't even know where to begin. That complication, the different personalities... I think, George is my favourite. Though he's supposed to be the "oldest", the "wisest", the one keeping Frank "sane", there is a hint of childish-ness there...
"Don’t be insolent.
I won’t, Doc."
Charlie. The good boy. The one who, because "Dr Way" wants it, chooses to keep quiet. Due to his respect and regard for Gerard, he suffers... Charlie's neurosis is very fascinating. That incredible need for things to be right... The desire stems, i think, because he is the subconcious that represents the repressed memories. The bad memories. That's why he needs for things to be right, to be correct, to go back to what they used to be.
And Iero. Clueless. He's a bit pompous. I didn't really like him, but i love his dreams. Vivid, and i love the way you portrayed it. Like dreams, they're weird, fast-paced and ever changing...
Frank. The clueless, sweet one. Need i say more? my heart breaks for him.
Amazing job love.
:arms:
This is probably one of your best works ever.
I can only dream of reaching the heights that you have accomplished with this.
Amazing.
And thanks for the inspiration ;D
The multiple personalities of Frank, how George was the only one of the three to truly understand what was going on and how he fought with Gerard constantly about it really made the story's characters come to life, as well as delve into what Gerard thought about what he was doing.
Iero's dreams were very intriguing, how they related to what was going on but how he didn't realise it was regarding what he, or Charlie, had let themselves go through. He was almost naive in that sense, too.
Your definitely going to win the competition, Neurotic is so good! :cute: