July 11th, 2009 at 06:22am
My.
God.
D'you wanna know something weird? As I was reading the last part of this story, "Love Story" came on the radio...coincidence or miracle? I think both!
Dude this was absolutely amazing!
The way you described every girls infatuation with Happily Ever Afters was totally accurate. Without realising it, you made my day by writing this and I love this story so much!
I didnt know that Caleb was blonde lol
I was smiling the whole way through this and I honestly have no Idea how you doubt yourself and your skill as a writer, because every time you produce an item of writing you contradict yourself.
Congratulations!!!
Consider yourself one of the fore-runners in this competition!
=D
Mayyyy I first mention this gorgeous layout? I loved it the second I laid eyes on it. I dunno if it's the colours or that cute banner or those adorable hearts, or if it's all of them coming together to look awesome. Seriously, I love it. And it suits the story perfect!
Ahem. Now, I'm going to have a fangirl moment. Would you please excuse me for a moment? CALEEEEEEB! CALEB I LOVE YOU! AAAH! I SEE YOU! I SEE YOU THERE! I LOVE YOUUUUUU! I MADE YOU A SIGN! WE'RE GONNA GET MARRIED! AND PEOPLE WILL WRITE FAN FICTION ABOUT US! AND JEALOUS PEOPLE WILL KILL ME OFF! OUR LIVES WILL BE AWESOME!
Yeah. Sorry, it just really, really, really needed to be done. I've been holding that one in for a while. You know it's gonna happen.
On a more serious note... This story is the absolute cutest thing I've ever read in my whole life. I love the Disney 'happily ever after' obsession the main character has, it's naive but endearing, and people secretly possess this obsession after all. Ah, wait? What was the main character's name? -goes to search- VAL. Found it!
Okay. So, let's start from the beginning: Caleb. Crying. It made my life, like, officially. And it was unbelievably adorable. I KNEW he loved this sorta stuff, of course he would start crying! And then he goes and tries to be all macho. Aww, Caleb, we all know what you're really like!
“N-no! I just, I was just, uh, these are tears of pain at your choice of malicious torture! Five hours of fairy tale bubble gum princess happily ever after bullshit is enough to make even the toughest guy beg for mercy!”
Best. Dialogue. Ever. Except we all know it's just a huge LIE coming from his mouth. -glares- You know he loves that romance.
About the blonde thing, I have always been really bad at remembering what characters look like. A lot of the time I just totally disregard what an author says about eye/hair colour and make my own person who looks totally different. My Edward wasn't even hot, he just this really weird old-fashioned guy. And he was ultra skinny. And he always looked tired. See? I don't even know where I get this stuff.
Anyway, the point of that rant was that I could never actually remember what Caleb's hair colour was, but I'd always imagined him with kinda dirty blonde hair. I dunno what kind of blonde you've got him as, but that's the one in my head. -sticks up nose- So I just feel proud that for once I got a character description mostly correct in my head!
Now, this one shot pretty much evolves to be the cutest thing I've ever laid eyes on. So yeah, I'm trying to imagine Caleb in a prince costume right now. EHEHE. I know what he should go as on Halloweeeeen, he'd look damn good.
AAAAH. Most adorable ending ever. Fhjdahga. Thoughts. Not. Making. Sense. Aaaah. Disjointed. Aaaah. AMAZING. LOVE ITTTT. Seriously, I would not be surprised if you won this contest.
:tehe: You'd definitely deserve to win.
Once again: this will have the Caleb fangirls swooooning.
LOVE IT.
AAH.
Okay, now I'm just repeating myself. I'll stop now.