Mistakes - Comments

@ Beferny wichards
Ohmygod thank you! I wrote this soo long ago for a contest, its actually really embarrassing looking back at it now. Thank you very much for your comment though!

The ending was so cute!

Another very well written sweet story. you have a nact for writing stories that leave a slight smile =)

:] I liked it.

Nice!
Here's what I thought:
Plot-line:Very interesting. It's a little bit original, but I like the way you made most of the story a flashback.

Intriguing Content: It was very intriguing, but I was slightly disappointed. I thought that there would've been moer to the story. It seemed a little slow to me, and I feel like you should've added more events to make it a bit more intriguing.

Writing: I don't recall seeing many mistakes at all.

Overall, it was a very nice one-shot! Thank you for entering the contest, and good-luck!