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  • z3ez

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    Wow beautiful,
    It actually made me almost cry =]
    November 9th, 2007 at 08:09am
  • Kid-2

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    I can't stand on my head without a wall nearby. Though I could probably try harder.
    October 15th, 2007 at 02:36am
  • Mystic Dreamer

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    WOW! That's like really deep!

    Is there...anything at all...you can't do?
    October 14th, 2007 at 04:27am
  • Loves Ray Guns.

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    too late the grade 10's vandalised my face.
    yeah love. this story is practically genius...
    you're one talented lady...singer, actress, writer...woah.
    August 12th, 2007 at 04:42am
  • Tainted

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    Very beautiful.
    I loved it!
    August 12th, 2007 at 01:01am
  • Kid-2

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    Cool cool. Thanks guys, I will make fix the quotation marks as soon as I am done saving Kels from a herd of grade 10's. Ha ha. Thanks for the comments though. Really, it touches me here. *Points to chest*
    August 12th, 2007 at 12:14am
  • Human Wreckage

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    It's beautiful.
    I don't believe in God, but still.
    It's beautiful.
    But I second what Sancwich-Masta said, about the speech marks.
    August 11th, 2007 at 05:28pm
  • FakePlasticCarrie

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    That was excellent! :D
    I loved it♥
    August 9th, 2007 at 05:16am
  • Syd Barrett.

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    This is really awesome!

    The only thing I didn't like about it was that the quotation marks seemed to be spaced incorrectly, or something. It was kind of hard to tell what was dialogue and what was narration in some parts of the story. But that stuff is only formatting, really; the story itself is great just the way it is.
    August 9th, 2007 at 12:44am
  • Loves Ray Guns.

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    Truely my favourite of everything you've ever written. Dance Dance Dance
    August 8th, 2007 at 11:39pm