August 18th, 2009 at 09:52am
Panic! at the Disco - Comments
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Oh my gosh, you've knocked me speechless. This was just absolutely fantastic, it was brilliant, it truly was.August 1st, 2009 at 04:09am
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Absolutely amazing.
A couple of grammar errors and whatnot, but nothing a quick once-over couldn't fix.
May I repeat my own words?
Absolutely amazing.July 29th, 2009 at 11:17am -
That was really good. You didn't place any blame on any one it was just...perfect.
:)July 23rd, 2009 at 08:57pm -
So sad....I do like how you didn't bash Ryan that much. However, it was told from Ryan's girlfriend's point of view, right?July 15th, 2009 at 12:17am
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Oh I forgot, about....but this was really good. =]]July 13th, 2009 at 10:03pm
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My sister called me earlier this week telling me that they had left. I've been bummed all week about it. =[[July 13th, 2009 at 10:03pm
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This was amazing.
I love the way it was explained... I don't really know how to say it, just the sequence of the protagonist being told the news, and the process she undertook to understand and accept it.
I particularly loved the way in which her relationship with Ryan was discovered, with Spencer alluding it to the band before they were so famous.
There were a few small spelling errors, nothing that a quick re-read couldn't fix.
Overall, this was a fantastic entry. It really made me feel. Thank you so much, I absolutely loved reading it.
:arms:July 13th, 2009 at 10:16am -
That was really great...
Man I hope the rest of the contest entries aren't depicting the split. I'm gonna need a new pair of tear ducts if they are.July 11th, 2009 at 10:48pm -
Man this made me tear up so bad!!July 11th, 2009 at 10:19pm
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Honest to the truth that made me cry... Oh man
Uh idk if you've heard Spencer's and Brennies Demo it uh their site
but i found Ryan and Jons demo on here
http://strikegently.com/?p=14455
its okay i guessJuly 11th, 2009 at 03:57pm
yeah i still haven't gotten over the fact that this happened.
but i love the way you explained it. you put together the parts that have been told by the boys to parts that seem like they fit. amazing.