hey supernaturalfreak101 told me to read it and i read im balling my eyes out!!!! im surpired i havent made the computer explode from my tears bella story
The funeral part was very very sad... :( but I liked it. I think the 'accident' part need a little more though. Like I knew he was gonna die cause of the summary but when he first got hit I remember thinking oh thats not so bad... like maybe he was gonna pull through, (stupid I know) but I think the accident needs a little more bang! (LOL) I mean like maybe try to make it sound more deadly...
Imma mess right now.
lol.
you're lucky my key board still works because of the tears! kidding lol