Really like this story. Jack is cute in scenes, but hes still a bum for using Leighton.
agreed. about the weather in boston lately. Yesterday wasn't entirely bad but thank goodness for A/C. I love autumn, it's so nice (deff my fav season).
First off, I cannot believe Elysa asked Leighton to be her maid of honor. It is just a bad idea and drama waiting to unravel. Second, I was not expecting that to be Jack's gift. It seems like he was trying to be sweet but he obviously has other motives. I still love that kid, even though he doesn't think at times. Third, this story is brilliant. I love the idea and both of your writing styles. :]
This was amazingly brill. I love they way you guys write. You both have to distince writing voices, but you're both freakishly fantastic :)
I can't find it in myself to dislike Jack for asking her to move in with him, while flat out lying about not having sex with her. I just can't not love him xD
I honestly don't know who made the worst move: Jack for bringing the deed or Leighton for agreeing to move in with him. Leighton's going to go insane and Jack is such a.... gah. Amazing update, =)
They're moving in together? This should be quite interesting, but between being Elysa's maid of honor and Jack's Elysa replacement, I have no idea how Leighton is going to maintain her sanity.
Jack is cute in scenes, but hes still a bum for using Leighton.
agreed. about the weather in boston lately.
Yesterday wasn't entirely bad but thank goodness for A/C.
I love autumn, it's so nice (deff my fav season).