You're Like The Good Scene In A Bad Dream - Comments

this is super good!!! :D i really hope that you update.

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looooved it! i'm sorry things are rough for you right now. i totally know how that goes! i'm so glad you found a way to update though. it was really good and i'm liking how matt's character is developing haha.

I loved the update! I read the author's note, i live in San Rafael :) lol

Hopefully you feel better soon...It sucks taht your sick and all of that shit has been ruining your life. I've been in the rut too, and actually I'm just getting out of it, of course then I had to go and get sick...sooo we'll just see what happens. Also amazing update...I am going to look at the contest thingy and if I think I can do it I'll try and write somethign for it considering I'm bored out of my mind! Keep writing :D

loved the update!
I love how sweet Matt can be behind closed doors!
Get better soon...your health is more important that your stories(even though they're good)! lol :)

I loved the update!! But how can you leave it at that! 0.o
And i hope you feel better soon!.....and update soon! lol

Amazing update.
MAtt is quite persuasive isn't he?

UPDATE! Yay, you make me happy! I've been waiting for this, you know. I even re-read the previous chapters yesterday, haha.

Vengeance is acting strange. Just 'cause he's bored, he expects her to talk to him, even though it wasn't that long ago that he was raping and beating her sister? Hello, issues! Then again, I would probably just be glad that he wanted to talk and nothing else. If I'm ever kidnapped, I really hope my kidnapper wants to "chill and watch some movies". That made me laugh 'cause it's so weird. Haha, not that I wouldn't want to watch movies with Shadows but still.. :P I loved how she thought of him as a gentle giant. It's so perfect.

My favorite part was basically ... well, the whole second part 'cause I adore when there's this whole teasing thing before an actual kiss. He was saying all the right things there and I think it's great that she was the one who like really kissed him first.

My favorite favorite part (haha) was this:
"Life's not fair sweetheart. You should know that by now." His hazel eyes locked with my blue ones and his face got a little closer. His lips brushed against mine gently and my breath caught in my throat. "You of all people should know how unfair it is to want someone you really shouldn't."

I don't think there's anything as awesome as "lips brushing". And of course I adore that he called her sweetheart 'cause I love little names like that. Anyway, is it obvious by now that I loved the chapter? 'Cause I really, really did!

(As for the A/N, you already know that you can talk to me whenever, right? Even if you're just having a crappy day and want to complain about it, send me a PM or add me on MSN or something. I'll be glad to listen and do whatever I can to help, as long as you don't feel bad and just keep it inside.)

i just want to say im so sorry for what youre going through, i know exactly how u feel coz my life is crazy at the moment and it has been hell for me and yeah sometimes you wonder what the point is but you just gotta keep going and telling yourself that even if you dont care for yourself, theres alot of other people who do. And instead of cutting try drawing on yourself, it sounds weird but it works.
Youre an amazing writer and im so glad you updated, i just really hope you get out of your rut and start enjoying life again :)
Update as soon as you can, i really love this story!

Ash xx

I am loving this story...hopefully you update soon, but only when you want to.

just found this story and i love it!

I want more!

Matt's awesome. ^_^

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I love this story....at times I am laughing so hard, i love how each guy has his own personality
Matt is the sweetie
Rev is the leader
Zack is...well he's kinda like a sidekick, he seems kinda mysterious
Johnny is like a little kid, kinda easygoing
an Brian is...well...he's an asshole...hahah

I love that you chose Brian to be the bad guy since he is normally the favorite...this story is awesome

Great work, I'm loving the updates.

It looks like Matt is falling for her.......hes so sweet........

I find their out of the blue niceness freaky. And Matt's evil grin in the end? Hm.. Yeah, I wouldn't be so sure that people are what they seem. But I guess we'll find out!

I'm glad all the guys aren't evil but Syn.....I think Matt should knock em around for a bit:) loved the update:D

I loved it!! Everyone is being nice to her! yay
ohhh i wonder why matt say he wasnt done with her :tehe:

I reallllyyyyy like this story(: