My Daddy, Gerard - Comments

Awh, she broke up with him! That's not cool. When you described him coming in the door, like Alison, it made me sad and scared, too. He just seemed so down in the way you descried his state. It sort of alarmed me when she said "don't die." I don't know why, it just made me wake up a little bit and become nervous. But I'm glad he had two daughters who are going to be by his side, now. Mariah (I probably fucked up the spelling like I always do) is an amazing name.

Dad picked the phone from my hand and told her all she wanted to know. Their conversation ended with “No, I won’t marry you,” and dad handed me the phone.

That made me laugh. =]

love it more pls
UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't worry about not updating right away. I haven't made any writing progress in a month, at all, because if I did, it'd be a waist of a new world I created and effort because it'd be horrible. That explains why I never posted a chapter of our story yet. If I did, it'd be ruined. As soon as I shake this off, I will complete a new chapter, I promise to.

"Hey, I'm a girl. It takes us longer than you to look pretty."

And how true is that? I've had people around me learn that the hard way. >< Hmm, a twin sister, is it? Well, I hope they get along great. Watch them be total opposites and hate each other. xD Knock on wood. Anyhow, don't stress with updating. =] But I can't wait until the next chapter.

this story rawks!

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still wuv it more soon plz!!!!!

I <3 it keep writing.
.plzzzzz write more

wuvs it more soon petty plz!

glad for the update
can u update again soon
i want to meet this twin :):D
more pls
UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woah woah woah. fucking awesomeeeeeeee.

Yay...more soon please!!

MORE NOW!!!! I DEMAND!!!!

plz?
x.x.x.x

I'll update as soon as I have access to a computer with my composition book nearby. I can't remember hardly anything from the new chapter I wrote in there, so yeah...

please pleas please update!!!!!!!!!!! i am utterly in love with the plot and details and everything else with the story!

I BEG YOU PLEASE UPDATE!

plz! i need moooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!
its goooooooood!

x.x.x.x

need more!
update now bitch!!
lol..

gah!it was adorable!
uhmm oh yeah when are you going to mention the charecters??

espoise with frank :( which channel & wat coutry) i want to no
its not fair if it was the uk I goin 2 si dnt no
i love your story :):D love it
let me no the info on Frankie pls :)
UPDATES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(I know how to get the episode online, if you want the link, just ask me)
Yay coffee < 3
Haha, I loved how she was taking out her morning rage on Brian, for some reason, and it made me smile.
I can't wait for updates =]
so update soon

THAT - was...cool
Your my idol.
I wrote one too.
But I don't think its as good as yours.
I'm your fucken NEW reader!
Bwuahahahah~MORE.

woo
more please!
xoxo
Molly

Write more pleae i love ur writing please