How bout after he tells her everything... which i'm guessing is going to happen in the next chapter.. she gets a little akward and quiet around everyone (or even just jake) because eberything shes just been told takes a while to come to terms with but not the vampire part the other stuff... and then jake confronts her about it and they have a heated arguement which leads to a heated kiss which leads to jake smiling and then leaving the room... which makes her even more confused..
Yay! I'm first!!;) (Hope it'll stay like that... Ha, the last time I comment, I was all so happy [hey! comments can make someone's day!=] for being first- but 'tll I finished writing the comment, someone already comment before me.. Ha, that sucked..)
Anyway, I loved the story, sounds really cute;) Can't wait to see what happens...