Algophilia. - Comments

Awh. I wish you had decided to continue on the story which i guess is pretty unlikly now, considering its been like a year lol But ya I just wanted to say that your story is really amazing and I'm absolutely in love with it<3 Especially Alec. He's my favorite(:

Im really intrigued by this story!
PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON~!!!!

You're allowed to kill me D:
I am the most awful, most crappy, most despicable story fan in the world. I haven't commented in like two or three chapters and I just thought that I should remind you that it ISN'T because your story is bad. It's very, very good. It's just that I've been slacking on mibba lately and I've been away at camp and because I really suck.

But anyway, I really love the depth of your characters and the constant plot twists. I like how you always keep the readers on their toes because it keeps everything just so interesting!

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Her head snapped around, cold, blue eyes focused on him as her fists shook. “You want him to fucking hurt you?” she asked, and he didn't break their locked gazes. “Oh! I fucking forgot. You're crazy.

That part totally drew me in, it was a mixture of anger and sadness and frustration that I felt all at once and it was wonderful.

I'm sorry that this comment is completely awful, but please update soon (: I'll do my absolutely best to make the next comment awesome.

NOOO DON'T WAIT LONGER!!! I love this story.

I adore this story..
I feel bad for Quin, I just think of what it would be like to be in her spot. Losing my best friend, and knowing that another boy is hurting him. I just want to jump into the story, and make everything okay. For Quin, for Alec. Even Ethan. I found it painful to read about Evan's death.
It's so intense.
<3

I still don't like Quin... Don't know why.
But this story is great, please update ASAP. :)

you never update.....

That was insane....! Keep writing, its an interesting plot.... I like quinn a lot by the by :)

<3

friends once more?
that would be lovely :]

as a whole, I liked this chapter :)
that last bit confused me a little, but I think that's cause I'm tired
was I really the only comment?
That's beyond weird!
anyways, update as soon as you can!

I just found this story, and I think I'm having a love affair with it.

Maybe a little more detail on how Alec likes pain? It doesn't necessarily have to be the sexual things, I would just like to see a little more of why Alec's in this place.

Quin coming back to the good side at the end of the chapter was defiantly surprising. And here I thought she was forever on the dark side! I don't know if I can completely forgive her yet...

Again, I absolutely love your story! <3 <3

*subscribes*

I still like this story, just waiting for it to progress :/

Holy fuck!
Yeah, sorry that doesn't really make any sense does it?
But Even's dead!!!!!
Update soon?
And Thursdays are better for me :D

(Oh man, oh man, leave it to me to forget that I hadn't posted a review. Feel free to hate on me Dx *sigh*)
Anyway, onward with the reviewing goodness!
Chapter eight

We've got a problem, love. I totally cannot decide how I feel about this one. On one hand, my mind is going 'ohmygodohmygodhekilledsomeoneandAlecneedstoforgivehimrightnow!' and on the other hand I'm just like 'huh, so he's really quite fucked up.' You see? I'm teetering right on the edge of a pointy blade.

Ethan's story, however, is very good. I've read over it a few times and I think that it's really quite creative. Not just a boring filler type explanation. It was one that kept you captivated as you read it, so I'll congratulate you on that one.

My favorite sentence(s) from this chapter would have to be the very end. It was very heartwrenching!

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Ethan sobbed into the material of Alec's shirt as Alec pet his hair, his touch gentle and almost loving. Fuck, Ethan, he thought. I wish I could learn not to care for you..

Very sweet too. Ethan and Alec are awfully adorable together, even if they both have quite a few problems...I think that that's what makes me like them so much though, the fact that they just plain and simply aren't normal. I've read quite a few stories that consisted of good plots, but dull and lifeless characters, (Mary-Sues, Gary-Stues, etc.) and they were absolutely painful to read! You've managed to come up with not only an interesting story line,but intriguing characters that I can love or hate at any given time, and ones that can make me laugh or smile or get angry or upset at.

This story is anything but lifeless. (:

I still find myself mad at Quin. I can't believe that she was such a bitch. Alec is confusing me. That boy needs to get his head straightened out! And Ethan is...Well, Ethan's always been pretty awesome. I really want to know what type of schizophrenia he's got though. Hallucinations, voices, nervousness...? Please elaborate on that! (:

(I hope that this made up for the horrible lateness of it. At least a bit. xD )

Whoah.
Heavy stuff, mann.
What will Alec do, though. Of course he cares for Ethan, but will he be with him?!
And what about Quin? How will their relationship go?!
AND WHAT ABOUT THE ALGOPHILIA?!
Where will that end up, I wonder. Or, more correctly speaking, how?
Luff luff luff
[I had ice cream tonight, excuse me =D]

hmm.... team alec or team ethan...*nibbles on cheek* cant i just love them both equally?!?

I also love you because you are the most awesome writer ever! :)
Cheyanne FTW!

I understand where Ethan is coming from.
Poor guy. :(
And I'm glad Alec didn't run away, he stayed and comforted his Ethan. :)
Loved ittt.

Yes an update!
Awesome.
I feel bad for Ethan.
But he still killed someone.
And that can't be forgiven.