Deadwood - Comments

Good job, great story! I think it was fitting that it wasn't an incredibly long story, it just worked that way. Things got tangled and exciting but not too messy, just the way a good story should have it! Congratulations on finishing, it was a wonderful read. =D

I knew it!! :]
Amazing story. My Mom loved it as well. Great ending, but sad it is over.

That was awesome! Great ending. I guess I'm a little saddened that it finished.
The whole idea that the 'Thomas' guy was lying to her was PERFECT.
And Oliver is such a cutie.

I think that was just about the most wonderful thing I've ever read...I listened to Remembering Sinday throughout reading this story and it really seemed to fit with the story...I'm not entirely sure why but it was incredible

Thank you! :D

:( Sad the story's over, but :) Happy cuz it was amazing! :)

YAY! Loved it xD I thought the ending was brilliant and you rounded it off nicely!

Very cool xD

Awh man, two chapters.
At least I know my anticipation will be ending.
Very nice chapter. I think I know something about Oliver that isn't as obvious as first assumed...
Perhaps. I'll find out. :]

New chapter was very good too, short, but well written =]
Only two chapters left???? I can't wait to find out what happensssss!!

Thank you so much! That means the world to me. :] I too love good grammar - much easier on the eyes.

Okay. Wow.
The way you write is just breathtaking.
And I actually love you! Because your grammar is perfect! Hahaha! I am a big fan of good grammar and it feels like you're reading a proper novel! Commend you muchly! But yeah the plot is excellent, the characters are believable, I was completely gripped from the first chapter! You just have a way with words! Very well done! I am impressed!

*subscribes*

Whoo! Then I'm glad, because that's what I'm striving for, hah.

That is what I am waiting to find out. Haha. :]

I'm sorry. I actually really like the name Edmund, but it popped into my head when I was writing.

But is everything as it seems?

Oh geez, but now it's even more anticipation!
I love Oliver, but what if he's Edmund?
And why do you make me hate the name Edmund? :[

Well, you're in luck! Because I'm posting the next chapter in just a moment. :]

Woah. I love this way too much.
I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :]

Aww.. I'm sad you're going to end it, but it is a very good story nonetheless. :)

i really like ur story! it's one of the most original stories i've read and it's amazing!
i can't wait for another update!

-RayNicFar17 aka Rachel

Thank you! :D That means a lot to me