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  • paperrwiings

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    Good job, great story! I think it was fitting that it wasn't an incredibly long story, it just worked that way. Things got tangled and exciting but not too messy, just the way a good story should have it! Congratulations on finishing, it was a wonderful read. =D
    August 19th, 2009 at 04:15am
  • Carrot Top

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    I knew it!! :]
    Amazing story. My Mom loved it as well. Great ending, but sad it is over.
    August 19th, 2009 at 01:10am
  • Annie Black

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    That was awesome! Great ending. I guess I'm a little saddened that it finished.
    The whole idea that the 'Thomas' guy was lying to her was PERFECT.
    And Oliver is such a cutie.
    August 18th, 2009 at 11:48am
  • Killer_Cupcake!

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    I think that was just about the most wonderful thing I've ever read...I listened to Remembering Sinday throughout reading this story and it really seemed to fit with the story...I'm not entirely sure why but it was incredible
    August 18th, 2009 at 06:15am
  • wake.the.dead

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    Thank you! :D
    August 18th, 2009 at 01:47am
  • darci.

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    :( Sad the story's over, but :) Happy cuz it was amazing! :)
    August 18th, 2009 at 01:39am
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    YAY! Loved it xD I thought the ending was brilliant and you rounded it off nicely!

    Very cool xD
    August 17th, 2009 at 10:51pm
  • Carrot Top

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    Awh man, two chapters.
    At least I know my anticipation will be ending.
    Very nice chapter. I think I know something about Oliver that isn't as obvious as first assumed...
    Perhaps. I'll find out. :]
    August 14th, 2009 at 11:44am
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    New chapter was very good too, short, but well written =]
    Only two chapters left???? I can't wait to find out what happensssss!!
    August 14th, 2009 at 11:23am
  • wake.the.dead

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    Thank you so much! That means the world to me. :] I too love good grammar - much easier on the eyes.
    August 13th, 2009 at 01:43am
  • AnExaltationOfLarks

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    Okay. Wow.
    The way you write is just breathtaking.
    And I actually love you! Because your grammar is perfect! Hahaha! I am a big fan of good grammar and it feels like you're reading a proper novel! Commend you muchly! But yeah the plot is excellent, the characters are believable, I was completely gripped from the first chapter! You just have a way with words! Very well done! I am impressed!

    *subscribes*
    August 12th, 2009 at 11:33pm
  • wake.the.dead

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    Whoo! Then I'm glad, because that's what I'm striving for, hah.
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • Carrot Top

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    That is what I am waiting to find out. Haha. :]
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • wake.the.dead

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    I'm sorry. I actually really like the name Edmund, but it popped into my head when I was writing.

    But is everything as it seems?
    August 12th, 2009 at 09:12pm
  • Carrot Top

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    Oh geez, but now it's even more anticipation!
    I love Oliver, but what if he's Edmund?
    And why do you make me hate the name Edmund? :[
    August 12th, 2009 at 09:04pm
  • wake.the.dead

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    Well, you're in luck! Because I'm posting the next chapter in just a moment. :]
    August 12th, 2009 at 08:52pm
  • Carrot Top

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    Woah. I love this way too much.
    I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. :]
    August 12th, 2009 at 08:13pm
  • darci.

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    Aww.. I'm sad you're going to end it, but it is a very good story nonetheless. :)
    August 11th, 2009 at 09:40pm
  • RFarley1991

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    i really like ur story! it's one of the most original stories i've read and it's amazing!
    i can't wait for another update!

    -RayNicFar17 aka Rachel
    August 11th, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • wake.the.dead

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    Thank you! :D That means a lot to me
    August 3rd, 2009 at 10:03pm
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