Eyes Speak More Than You Dare. - Comments

Borderline (100)

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hahahaahahha that ending was so funny. i loved the story i want more i wanna see how it turns out :(

October 31st, 2009 at 02:11am

bruise pristine (200)

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Haha.
I loved this, expecially the last paragraph.
Frank is such a little cunning smartass, isn't he?

July 13th, 2009 at 06:14pm

happilyappled (100)

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CLAIM! :con:
This was so cute! (: I kinda laughed at the thought of Gerard being a nanny, especially after thinking of this story where the nanny was someone lustfully 'dangerous' to have around (a Frerard too), but the story itself made me change my mind. He was so polite it kinda broke me, but in the end, he was just doing his job. I like that. I loved how he was just so serious and then that hint of lust it his eyes. And how Frank read it perfectly, and used that to tease him with his beahvior. I really, really liked this. After all, it wasn't your occasional nanny story in which one of them is rather very polite and completely obsessed with rules, or rather naughty and completely disobedient. It was just your average teenage nanny, who probably needs money to go to college next year, or who probably was forced by the parents to get a job for some reason we don't need to know about.
Ha, I liked this very much, but especially how Frank wasn't so stupid at all.

"Good night to you, too, Gerard. May your dreams be filled with images of me"
I had to highlight this because it was just so genius! It establishes the difference of nannies in this story, I believe.

Good luck in the contest :cute:

July 12th, 2009 at 05:49pm