What You Feel Is What You Are. - Comments

Awesome!
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I LOVE IT. :3

From The superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Conest!

To start off...I loved the title of this story. It instantly drew me in and I was anxious to find out more. I felt so bad for Alex. I just wanted to hug him. The ending was so, so perfect! I squealed a little and smiled widely. I can see this actually being a real life story (not with them but you know, right?)

The plot was awesome and my favorite part was when they had to cover their faces with their hands. That'd be such an adorable picture! (:

I really, really enjoyed reading this (:

Hey. I'm from The Superly Duperly All Time Low Slash Contest. Sorry for the wait!

I liked this a lot. It was really cute, even in the setting they were in.

We stepped out together into the main club, covering our faces with our hands, ‘cos we’d been fools and had forgotten our masks.

We hit the street – delightfully calm and serene in comparison to the rowdy, gaudy club – and dropped our hands, now able to let the greater public see who we were.

I felt my heartbeat grow as his hand slipped into mine, a strange feeling of joy growing inside my chest.

“Good to have you back, Barakat.” He said quietly, smiling properly for the first time since I’d seen him.

“Good to be back, Gaskarth...” I replied, smirking and dipping my head down so that my lips met his.

That ending was undeniably cute. I have to admit, I squeaked a little.

Keep on checking the thread for the results. Good job, and good luck!

I really liked this tbh :D
Alex would be a great stripper :L lol
Aww and i found it cute how they were reunited XD

Not a slash fan, but I personally thought this was a really good, original idea. It has potential, just seems slightly rushed - I enjoyed reading it though :cute:

I usually don't like Jalex but this one was so adorable :tehe: :XD
I loved it, great job.
And I agree with Wednesday Way!, Alex would be a cute stripper :tehe: :lmfao
Amazing.

oh, my God!

i so wish that Jack and Alex were gay together!

That story was the best gay fan fic of Jack and Alex that I've read!

Amazing!

That was adorable.
When they started holding hands, I got chills (:
I found the perfect song for it too:

Cross My Heart ( Acoustic ) by Mariana's Trench.

(:

I've read a lot of the stories in this competition, but i really really like this one :]]
I love how it's tragic yet sweet.
Great job :]]]]

I've never read Jalex before, so this was the first :D
And I loved it!

Thank you for introducing me to something so adorable.

This was adorable with a side dish of sexy. Alex would be such a cute stripper. This was really good and I did enjoy it. It was my pick me up of the day. Bravo!