Wow that was really good! It kind of captured the essence of chilhood, where the smallest things meant the world. And how in reality, it was stupid. It's so sad that she had to die.. Anyways, you did a really good job! (:
Alright so first of all...if that's you sucking at first person, I can't imagine what being good at it is. That was really sad and not at all expected but really really good. I love how it actually sounded like a child speaking. I'll let you know hwo you did on the 20th!