It's A Sin. - Comments

  • kjqHD

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    i wish i could write crap....this is truly awesome. Your dialogue is incredible. If this is "crap" i want to read your good writing!
    June 20th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • BehindTheScenes;

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    This is not crap. Don't even begin to think that.
    You're a beautiful writer and you're talent is just, outstanding. Don't deny it.[:
    I loved this. It's cute in a sort of sad way.
    <3
    May 17th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • SimplyStephanie

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    If this is crap this is the most beautiful crap ever!!
    I think its really good and just lovely. :)
    May 6th, 2010 at 09:10am
  • heywhatsuphello

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    why do you thnk this is crap? i think its awesome. its short but you get a good idea of the characters and all of that other stuff. i like it. *subscribing*
    August 31st, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Dreams..to..Live.

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    Aww this was so sweet! And definitely not crap!!
    I really liked it. :]
    August 16th, 2009 at 10:35am
  • Jimmy Novak

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    So not crap quality! It's awesome! short n' sweet! :3 =] <3 <3 <3
    August 8th, 2009 at 08:59pm
  • ghostbrainz.

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    You are out of your mind! That story is no where near "crap." It's amazing. It really is. Your writing is awesome, whether you think so or not. =D I really really like it. You should continue this, it's already an awesome one-shot. :]
    July 20th, 2009 at 07:14am
  • H. S.

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    First off this is not crap at all! It`s reallly good.
    You`re talented. Only a few people people can write a story with mostly
    dialouge and still have the readers seeing everything that happens inside
    their heads.

    xoxo
    =]
    July 19th, 2009 at 09:45am
  • faithleilani

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    I like it
    i think its cute
    can you add the link for my contest onto the summary if this is you entry
    im going to put a link on the contest for this story so people know who finishedDance
    July 17th, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • Perihelion_

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    Ha ha ha ha haha ha ha ha haha ha....!

    That was great! What a picture it was, RadiosAnd Rocketships...It was so melo-dramatic! That totally brightened up my evening *wipes tears from eyes*
    Ah...
    July 17th, 2009 at 08:19am
  • RadiosAndRocketships

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    It's not crap, have a little confidence in yourself! (:

    I like how that even though most of it was dialogue I could still clearly see a picture in my mind. And plus it's something a lot of people probably have to go through.

    Good job! (:
    July 13th, 2009 at 07:45pm