This is not crap. Don't even begin to think that. You're a beautiful writer and you're talent is just, outstanding. Don't deny it.[: I loved this. It's cute in a sort of sad way. <3
why do you thnk this is crap? i think its awesome. its short but you get a good idea of the characters and all of that other stuff. i like it. *subscribing*
You are out of your mind! That story is no where near "crap." It's amazing. It really is. Your writing is awesome, whether you think so or not. =D I really really like it. You should continue this, it's already an awesome one-shot. :]
First off this is not crap at all! It`s reallly good. You`re talented. Only a few people people can write a story with mostly dialouge and still have the readers seeing everything that happens inside their heads.
I like it i think its cute can you add the link for my contest onto the summary if this is you entry im going to put a link on the contest for this story so people know who finished
That was great! What a picture it was, RadiosAnd Rocketships...It was so melo-dramatic! That totally brightened up my evening *wipes tears from eyes* Ah...
It's not crap, have a little confidence in yourself! (:
I like how that even though most of it was dialogue I could still clearly see a picture in my mind. And plus it's something a lot of people probably have to go through.