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  • Mimi's buttercup.

    Mimi's buttercup. (100)

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    This seems...well weird, but interesting too.

    I would recomend spacing out the chapters and when the characters talk to change the paragraphs.

    It makes it easier to read and stuff.
    July 13th, 2009 at 02:07am
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