Jordan's goal was never to make her cry, but he was going to make his goal to have her stop crying before the summer was over. Brilliant! More soon. :]
I do like the interaction between her and Jordan. I feel so sorry for her, she seems to take one step forward and then two steps back. I hope you update soon!
Ahh! I actually really like this story. One thing though, if you describe T-Bay....don't describe it like it's a little town lol that's one thing that annoys me :( It's a fair size really, we only have farms 15-20 minutes out of the city :P
omg so good and no i dont think ur taking the story to slow! ur keeping it real(some stoires are so quick it annoys me!) plus u keep us wanting more!@ lol
I just found this story and I'm in love! I love how you're trying to keep it realistic. Not rushing anything. It's a quality I really like in a story. Plus the plot is really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!