One: awesome way for them to meet and I actually pictured Jack doing something like that. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can not wait to read and find out.
Him: another great chapter that had great descriptions. Wondering what is going to happen next? Can not wait to resf and find out in the first chapter.
Her: great descriptions and can't wait to read the rest of the story. Got a question though; how is it that she is blonde with green eyes when the rest of the family is brown haired and brown eyes?