Ready - Comments

Wow. This basically describes every girls first time being pressured. And, you captured it perfectly.
I loved how you described the emotions for the girl. And, with everything that was happening, I felt like I was there. I also liked how you didn't say if she went through it or what happened. In my mind, she still went through it, the manipulation got to her. But, there's also a twinge of hope that she didn't and she won't do something she'll regret later. Amazing, overall. I am so glad you entered it in the contest :cute:

I am so sorry for the wait and lacking comment! I was going to do this great review on the entries, but it came out slightly hard to do with creations under 300 words. I hope this was good enough for you! :shifty:

That was awesommee~

I loved the end. "I was never ready."
That was... I dunno how to describe it. So I'm just gonna say it was cool. :mrgreen:
(I swear, that smilie is in like almost all of my posts...)

Wow. That was incredibly well-written.
I'm really amazed that you're able to open up so much and write this. I can tell that it's a tough thing to face and accept, but I think writing this really shows that you're certain about your own feelings - that you're not easily manipulated. I admire that.