Candy Mountain. - Comments

I finally got to read this (I'm late, I know xD), and I laughed my ass off. :lmfao :lmfao

At first I couldn't imagine Night and Skinny as those two unicorns, cause it's clearly Cat and second Cat annoying Bone, but you managed to do it very believably.

“Bone. Bo-one. Wake up, Bone. Bone...” *dies laughing* I so imagined Skinny jumping around, waving his hands and talking in that insanely high voice. :XD

Cat was braced against the wall, his hands clenched into fists and his head resting between them. Whip was behind him, slamming into his ass so hard that if the wall hadn't been there for support, they would surely both be on the floor – and Cat would be getting a serious case of carpet burn in uncomfortable places. I was all NNGHH at this part, until I got to the carpet burn part and then I died laughing. Again. :lmfao

AND HE LOST HIS PANTS. :XD

Awesomeness!

This was too fucking funny! I watched the video a few hours ago laughing myself to death, I immagined it was Bone and two copies of Cat :XD x'D
Then, now I read this, and started laughing myself to death again
Great written!

:lmfao
This is hilarious! I actually think I might love you for this, and the fact that it's dedicated to all us on the DS thread makes me feel special. :tehe: I think that it's orginal even though its based of something else, and even though it's quirky you still write it well and with good grammar. (: Also, I love the way that you changed some bits- such as the 'cave' was a bus, and that it was a kids ride that told them the way. :XD It's also funny because what on earth is a rollercoaster doing just besides some random street? But, it is a crack!fic afterall. xD

Of course, you also managed to fit some good old Candy in there. :XD Hehehe, and the ending was just hilarious. I was expecting him to lose a kidney, but losing his pants was even better!

Great work! :XD

Omfg! :lmfao
This is so awesome!

I couldn't stop laughing, I imagined everything in my head like a movie :XD

“Bone! Bone! Bone!” Skinny hissed, excitement lacing his voice.

“What?”

“We're under a streetlight, Bone!”

“Oh christ,” Bone muttered, burying his face in his hands. - Specially this part, I could imagine Skinny's face all happy saying that and Bone all


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Bone woke the next morning in his bunk. The bus was quiet – too quiet – and his head felt as if someone had smacked him with a sledgehammer. He was kind of alright for a minute, before he threw his legs out from under the covers.

“For fuck's sake... where are my fucking pants, guys?”

I wonder what happened to his pants :tehe:

I love this!