rosie, this is so amazing. you are clearly a talented writer, and this is just amazing omg, and you portrayed the emotions right, and really made it moving for the reader. BRILLIANCE. UTTER BRILLIANCE. it's really uniquely written and i love it lots. you need to write a lot more stuff like this cos it suits your writing style; especially the way its developed & everything. keep going; you've got talented.
keep going!!! I really like it!!!! Just the way it's written....it's very unique, I haven't read anything like it before. About to go start your art ^^ *subscribes*
BRILLIANCE.
UTTER BRILLIANCE.
it's really uniquely written and i love it lots.
you need to write a lot more stuff like this cos it suits your writing style; especially the way its developed & everything.
keep going; you've got talented.
xxx