December 20th, 2009 at 11:48pm
That was super super good!
Like the description was amazing and just how it flowed was amazing.
The ending though, the ending made me go "NO!" Super loud at my computer.
Yeah I was that into it.
I swear, this shouldn't be a one shot. Like if you turn it into like maybe a short story it would be so cute! I love Rian too so it's alll good ! :D
But it would be a super sad ending D:
As warped tour shirts said, "Fuck, Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Fuck Cancer" :D
incredible description and just really well written
are you still going to make it into a short story? I think, judging by the rest of your comments, that you'd be loved for a continuation
I know I'd love it :)