Kay Im so sorry for not finding this sooner! Mauer is my favorite! And im not saying that for the reasons all the guys think, he's talented. I just read this whole thing in one sitting and thought Id comment and let you know that I absolutely love this story! More soon?
Holy crap! When I read the e-mail for this, I forgot what it was. Then I clicked the link and got excited! I loved the update :) pleeeeease don't leave me hanging without an update!
oh no! I forgot one suggestion and a question. sugg - add Nick Punto. he's hilarious in the dugout, I've heard. doing magic tricks and stuff.. :P quest - what year is the story set in? cause that might prevent you from adding Nick. and that would make me sad. ): oh and just make Nick SS, since Jess plays third. ok now I'm finally done commenting!!! (: ¡mucho amor a tú!
OH MY GOD! (you guys) *sorry, couldn't resist.* I love you. I love this story. I love the plot. I love Minnesota. I love the Twins. I love Joe Mauer. I love Justin Morneau. I love Kevin Slowey. I love Michael Cuddyer. I love Gardy. I love Jesse. HOLY SNAPS THAT'S A LOT OF LOVE! SO YOU BETTER NOT HAVE GIVEN UP ON THIS STORY CAUSE I WANNA KNOW HOW IT ENDS! anywho. good plot. (: great story. I found this cause I decided to write a Joe story and searched to see if anyone else had. and this is my favorite. so update! please! (: oh! I forgot! I love your title. KICKASS!!!!
Great story!! keep the chapters coming i am so excited to read what happens next!!! Story really pulled me in and poor jess and joe and how exciting for charlie to come back around!!
Oooooh, Charlie's back!! I definitely wasn't expecting that to happen! I wonder if him and Jess are going to talk and if so what's going to happen between the two of them, especially after that game! Can't wait for more!
Oh my goodness! Well, that was quick! One minute, she's breaking up with Charlie, and the next, she's sleepign with Joe. Not that I'm complaining here. I've been telling you that I want her and Joe together since the beginning. I'm just hoping it's not going to be awkward between them now or anything. And, I'm wondering what's going to happen when their teammates figure out what happened between them. Can't wait for more!
I love that Joe realized that he's in love with her. Though, I'm wondering what's going to happen with Jess and Charlie! I have a feeling he's not going to be too happy when he learns that she went out on a date with Joe for her birthday!
And, I loved that last chapter, where she went shopping. And, to have Kevin go and find her was ingenious! I could totally see him being all embarrassed, walking into dress shop after dress shop trying to find her!