Hi I loved this story more then any i've read. It's sad, kinda horrific, romance, tragedy and reunion all rolled up into 1. I almost cried when Vengeance ( Hey, don't think i'm crazy ) was stabbed. I woulda cried if Zacky didn't come back. I love Zacky sooooooooooo much. Vengeance Is An A$$HOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Zacky is a SWEET, CUTE, ROMANTIC, TEDDYBEAR. LLZ ( Long Live Zacky )
So does this mean that she has an alter ego too? Like Raylie Revenge??? Awesome.. I kinda like it but I hope she doesn't kill Zack by mistake. Great update:D
when i read this story it played like a movie in my head, seriously. fucking AWESOME!!! this is like, theee perfect Script for a horror/thriller/suspense film i can totally see Rob Zombie, Quinten Tarintino, or Robert Rodriguez direct a movie like this.. And it would SOOOO make lots of money and definitley get good reviews! you should think about making this a script and sending it to an agent or someting. you've got major talent hun =D if this was my story, i would SOOO take action <33
What if her plan work but does the opposite, because vengence was in control for so long, he seems like he is the more dominant personality....and alot of the time the more dominant personality wins? :-S i really hope this isnt the case with Zacky/Vengence.
it was an awesome update, and i loves this story muchly =)
What if her plan work but does the opposite, because vengence was in control for so long, he seems like he is the more dominant personality....and alot of the time the more dominant personality wins? :-S i really hope this isnt the case with Zacky/Vengence.
it was an awesome update, and i loves this story muchly =)
like vengeance is the person who raylie hurts but like since zacky loves her, he feels the pain as it heartbreak, that kind of pain. hope it helps. cause it made sense in my head ;)
*screams* Update again soon! I love this story! I'm a little confused about the whole Vengeance feeling the physical pain when in Zacky's body, and Zacky feeling the emotional pain when he's being taken over by Vengeanace...but I think I get it.
This is amazing! So, please update again soon, yeah? :D
omg skool is a bitch.but when u dont write it kinda makes it better cuz it gives it suspense.when u dont update it gives me time 2 use ma noggin and ma imagination 2 think of whats gonna happen and thats kinda fun.take ur time updating cuz we all dont want u failin.haha.GREAT STORY!