Assurance - Comments

i love this story and how everything's building up to something!
i'm really intrigued to know what happens next! keep up the good work :)

i cant wait to read what happens at the party. I hope he doesnt ditch her for some slut...

I fucking love this story.

I don't know why, it's just amazingly good.

I subscribed.

:D

I love this :D
Hope you update soon!

i love how this story is developing!! can't wait to read what happens next...update!!! :)

UPDATE.
UPDATE.
UPDATE.

get the point?

just to warn you, my comments are kinda different. when im not to lazy...
I comment as im reading. if that makes sense...

Ch. 5!
I love the name Milo
i don't know why, just like, it seems like such a stoner name
wait, how was his name Milo and now its Jonah?
aww, Oli's not there):
he'll probably make an appearance at least, right?
oh i hope so...
DONT TAKE A DRINK, HE PROBABLY SPIKED IT!
...sorry...
oh, psh, there's barely even alcohol in that...fuck that shit, mannn
i knew i didn't like him from the start
he seems to be the type to make a lot of assumptions
I TOLD YOU HE WOULD COME!
psh, what mother wants their daughter to apologize to some guy that attacked her with his lips?!
I agree with Oliver, she's "proper crazy"(:
aww how cuteeeee
they both gave eachother gifts(:

there you have it, doll
keep it up

This is absolutely brilliant!
You’re a really good writer. Haha, though I’ll be honest if you don’t mind me saying, the accents you wrote sort of distract me a bit >.<
But I can hear Oli’s voice in my head without the written British accent : D
I’m subscribing :]
<3

I like it
but her mother annoys me
can't wait till the next update

i love it so far (:
update soon!

Ooohh I like this already:)

You put me in the story! haha. Who did I marry, and I'm very pulled into thsi story!