When will chapter three be released? Alright this is so far so good. It is a little rushed and a wee bit unrealistic. Yet, it is still good. You could add a little more substance to it also. Please note, I'm not trying to be mean. I'm only giving con crit. Gah don't hate me now! *hides*
I like criticism like that.
It helps.
I'm typing up the chapter now.