The Price of Beauty - Comments

  • Story/Review Game

    I picked this because it was one of the few with a short description.

    And I have to say, I was rather impressed. I liked the narration. Normally I don't like things in narration (third person) such as "but as I said", but I liked the way it sounded here.

    I liked the description of the laptop. I thought it was snarky and modern and amusing.

    I like the comparison of beauty. Of how the "queen" says that beauty is bleach blonde hair and plastic surgery and Double D breasts. I like that it's the image that we are all used to seeing as beautiful.

    Of course, the ending is beautiful. The fact that she could feel regret. We didn't think that was possible.
    September 3rd, 2009 at 04:52pm
  • It's good.
    Really. Dance
    July 28th, 2009 at 12:27pm