Firstly, I like your take on the word. It was a lot different to what I expected, and that's good, because that's what I wanted.
The sex was very well written for only a second attempt, well done. I liked the description of how Lindsey loved guns, and her obsession and fascination of them was portrayed. I liked how the ending of chapter 1 matched the ending of chapter 2, it worked well.
Sex hair looks awesome on him. I'd just like to say, I bet it does! :tehe:
Anyway, well done on your efforts. It was very well written. :cute:
The sex was very well written for only a second attempt, well done. I liked the description of how Lindsey loved guns, and her obsession and fascination of them was portrayed. I liked how the ending of chapter 1 matched the ending of chapter 2, it worked well.
Sex hair looks awesome on him.
I'd just like to say, I bet it does! :tehe:
Anyway, well done on your efforts. It was very well written. :cute: