What If I Told You I Love You - Comments

you know how i feel about the slapping.
and this story <3

Great by they better get back together!!

great update....poor Sirena..

Ohh what's going to happen now that she's going back???!!!!
UPDATE!

I really liked this chapter. Everyone else is kind of busy hating TJ, so it was nice for her mom to give her different advice.

Now why he didn't try to get ahold of her all summer, I don't know. He better move fast though if he doesn't want to lose her.

Love the mom daughter stuff!!!

dude he seriously fucked up in my book: some space is good in the beginning but he should've made the effort to grovel at her feet, BIG TIME

Her mom is pretty awesome.
I like that she is telling her to give him a second chance.
I'm not one to forgive and forget but I think Sirena should.
Although, I'm mad at TJ for being an idiot and not visiting or calling.
More soon. :]

another great chapter,
kinda sad with tj's absence and all
but still really good! (:
and seriously, he didn't even try calling her?!
what a jerk.
can't wait for what's to come back in st. louis.

That chapter was sad but I like how she interacted with her mom and it showed their relationship.

What is wrong with TJ? He didn't even bother to communicate with her after she waited and waited for him all summer...that was so depressing.

I can't wait for TJ I kinda miss him even though I'm mad at him for being such an idiot. Update soon! =]

Um, I kind of had a lump in my throat reading this. So, so depressing.
Stupid TJ, he was in the same state as her and didn't even bother to call?! So much for fighting for who you love... boys are so dumb.
This was really good! Can't wait for moree! :)

awww poor girl i feel bad for her good update! and teej is in the next 1 ya!

I just want to smack the cute off his face right now.. Why didn't he get ahold of her.. I hope he got a lot of shit from everyone and did the rookie hazing instead of telling then they had sex..rwar Tj

Sirena reacted a lot more rationally than I would have. I would have gone apeshit. Like, returning all his stuff to his front door then throwing a lit match on it. And going away was the right decision. She needed time to think.

I really liked this chapter, it was good to see the relationship between her Mom and learn more about Sirena. I wonder what will happen next, i can't wait :D
Well anyways, awesome update! more soon : P

Love it! update soon!

sigh.
you made me get out of bed.
throw on a random shirt on kyles bedroom floor
that i might as well point out that it smells like puke.
FOR NO TJ?!
but thats okay.
i really liked that we got to see what her mom is all about and such.
and FUCK YOU TJ OSHIE FOR BEING A COMMUNICATION FAIL. seriously.
next one has some teej, yeah?
<3loveyou.

I was like :o when she was talking to Tj in the locker room....I felt her pain because breakups are just awful...but in the end it was great

That was amazing. I was totally going through that with her. I so didn't want that to come, but now that it has, I hate TJ too. (Not enough that I'm above begging you to make them get back together.)

Very Well Done!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I think this might have been my favorite so far, despite the fact it's incredibly sad : ( ... I felt so bad for Sirena.
But it was written with soooo much detail and that made it incredible!
I can't wait for the next update !

Oh my gosh!
That was so sad!
I feel so bad for her!
Him to I guess.. Haha.
He fell for her!
Haha.
That was AMAZING!!!!!
=DDDDD!

ah-mazing writing! i really felt for Sirena.
can't wait for updates!

and happy belated birthday