Marking Time - Comments

oh my goodness! i LOVE your story(: please, update soon. i cannot wait!

so i was attracted to this cause i'm in marching band, and i've been writing a band story too.. and i kept reading cause i, also, like a mello player. haha.. only he's not mean(:

this is good, hopefully you keep updating, cause i like thisss.

Aww, you were able to update! Yay! I've missed this story.

Well, that game sure sounded interesting. And that was quite a way to end it. Haha. Of course the last one had to be lips to lips. And she is paired with him again. Goodness, that's just her luck, eh?

Loved the update and I'm looking forward to more!

Nice update!

That challenge sounds rather interesting. And they won! Yay! Haha. Must have been nice to hear they don't have to be harnessed together anymore! Haha. But I'm wondering why Simon paused before he answered her when she asked him what his mom's name is.

Loved the update and I'll be patiently waiting for more!

I really enjoy your style of writing. It's very original, but your also very good with diologue and description... and I think you should write that other story of yours to!

loveeeeeee this still, which is an achievement because i usually get bored with stories on here a couple of chapters in aha! but i love this a lot, and i don't think the chapters are too long cause this length means you get more in a update! x

Ooh, harnessed together? Goodness! And awww, he was being nice at the end! Sweetness! Haha. I totally loved the update!

And in regard to the length of your updates, they are perfectly fine for Mibba. I have a story on here that has 20+ page updates on here and people love them. I'm fine with you keeping them this long.

Great job! I'm lookin' forward to more!

I can't wait to see the chaos that comes with Daisy and Simon being paired up together! :) Your story is excellent so far. Very descriptive and entertaining. I love it, and can't wait for more!
Keep writing when you have some time <3

I love this tbh well done (: it's really well written and planned and everything you're really talented! x

Awesome update.
That game of Twister was rather interesting. Haha.

Lookin' forward to more!

Ooh, paired with Simon, eh? I'm lookin' forward to seein' how that plays out!

I really enjoyed this!
I'm in marching band, so I can totally envision this kinda stuff happening with my bandmates aha!

This is flipping amazing- you're fanstastic at writing!
Update soon? :D I'm looking forward to Daisy&Simon's...adventure in the marching band. xD &I have to agree with anexaltationoflarks, there's only three stories including yours that prompted me interested. o_O UPDATE SOON!

Wow! I don't usually read stories like this because they bore me but I like your style of writing! I ceommend you for getting me interested in a story I would otherwise have discarded because of the topic (that's not meant to be an insult, btw, it's just the truth)
x

I really like this. I usually don't read originals, but this is great!

Excellent!!! Very unique!!