A. You spelled constructive criticism correctly :) B. Oh my God, Shitchie. If I could write half as much detail as you do in your chapters... I don't even know. That was purely amazing. I loved every word from beginning to end but my favorite part was probably that final paragraph. I cannot WAIT until the sequel. I'm a little nervous though for what the families reactions will be when they ALL find out that Peyton is pregnant. I hope Nick really can keep his mouth shut. <33333
So...I fuckin love this storie!!! I know I came in late and it's almost over soon but I mean it I really love this storie and I can't wait for the next part to start, it's going to be amazing!!!
yay yay yay yay!!!!!!! JOE FINALLY GREW A BRAIN!!!!(: dude, that last chapter was EPIC!!! she's staying!!!!(: with him!!!! and they're gonna be together!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait for the next chapter AND the sequel!!!!! update really soon!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my gosh! I knew Peyton was pregnant! Joe just needs to get her now! He'd better man up soon or he's going to lose her..... again. Gosh, Joe! lol Thanks for updating. Please update again soon. :D
i dont think that peyton is acting weird at all... Joe is being a total ass and peyton is actually acting nice to him. If a guy did that to me, then i would've been flirting around and making him see that he didn't hurt me, putting on a fake smile and trying to forget about him, even if inside i was slowly dying.
I really hope Camilla cheated on Joe with Rob or some other random guys and that Joe finds out.