I just reread this and it's soo good. I pictured exactly what was happening, that's how good you are at describing things. Again, you're a great writer and you should post everything you write. (:
d explanation really helped.. it was really nice sa.. liked d 2nd chap more than the 1st.. my flight 2moro morning.. finally offing my mac after months.. muahahahahaha!!!! gone crazy.. sorry.. XD!! i'm gonna b on msn so u go online oso ah!!
Your stories are so fantastic, I'm surprised you don't have ten stars and millions of pages of comments. This is a really good story. I almost started crying. D: You best keep writing, since you're so lovely at it. ^-^
You made me feel for the character, and I understood how empty she was inside.
Another wonderful job :D