Forever - Comments

Holy good God. I couldn't believe that it was written so well for a one-shot, and when I got to the end I hadn't even realized that you didn't use names, and that made it real for me. You created a real story with real people and didn't even feel the need to introduce names. For that, I commend you. =]

I liked this one. It held a lot of meaning because these things do happen in real life. There's a book called The Pact by the author Jodi Picoult and it's absolutely amazing how she writes it. It's got a similar feel as this one-shot so if you'd like to check it out you can...lol. Great job by the way because it was beautiful and well written.

it was really great, so adorable. I love your writing. I would even be interested in reading more of these characters *wink wink* haha. just kidding, I know it is a one shot, but I really enjoyed it. I loved the characters interactions with each other and the pinky promise! :mrgreen:

I loved this so much It was adorable

That was just too cute! I loved it.

I thought you had started yet another stroy, but I liked it. It was cute.

Naww! It was so adorably cute! Told the story of their past and present very nicely and had that perfect kind open ending that I really like :)

And yes, I must admit that I imagined Brian throughout the whole thing... simply because I know he's your muse. hahaha.

I loved it babes!

it was sweet :)
I loved it!

I totally agree!

It was supper, super sweet.

*singing voice* Loved it!

i thought it was like uber sweet.
like, wipe away a tear sweet.