Crazy - Comments

I think that was a great well written story. Original to no end and I liked it immensly. Spelling and Grammer was excellant. And I liked the banner and layout very much.

perhaps you should turn this into a two or three shot. I almost feel like it wasnt finished with Jimmy. Idk just an opinion of mine. Other than that I think it was great

Good luck and thanks for entering!

it's really good!

Hey, now that was good.
No matter what, the whole theme of ‘Crazy’ was throughout the story.
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And you incorporated the lyrics well too.
It was pretty neat.

oh wow :D
i really liked that, like alot. I was original, it was clever, it was just really brilliant :D
i liked how most of the members were mentioned and how in the end she ends up helping a friend becuase she opened her eyes unlike everyone else around her.
Your grammar and spelling was also excellent :)
Extra brownie points for layout :)
well done :D!