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  • ALOTA

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    Glazed Donut, I read this story today for probably the millionth time in my life. And it never ceases to bring a somewhat tear to my eyes.
    August 3rd, 2011 at 05:55pm
  • tmwall

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    Oh my gosh you are a great writer. I absolutely loved[u /] this story. :)
    December 23rd, 2009 at 05:46am
  • Starlit-sky_shininG

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    this was really, really good. i almost cried, haha lol
    September 9th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • Wintergirl.

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    This is insanely adorable. I love it. I can really relate to the whole dating-Dylan/loving-Will. This story gives me hope. :-)

    Usually I don't like time gaps like that in one-shots. They just don't seem to flow. But, somehow, you made it work. That's awesome.

    I'm curious about what sparked Will to finally come back to Marie Jane, though. (love her name, by the way)
    August 31st, 2009 at 04:08am
  • Dodger

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    loved this so cute
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    July 30th, 2009 at 02:37pm
  • ladyvader

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    This was just as amazing as Catch Me! I loved her character and I kind of pitied Dylan- he didn't deserve that. I couldn't understand, however, was why William left Marie Jane. Because he loved her and couldn't cope with it? Or what :think:?

    And you totally pimped my story omgno:. That's so sweet!
    July 21st, 2009 at 02:40am
  • EverSoSarahSweet

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    Wow, this is really good. I guess I have some compition in the contest. I'm Sarah btw
    July 19th, 2009 at 10:49pm