Fryan Up Some Love - Comments

Awesomeness!
Btw I'm starting a fryan this week, hopefully...

That was amazing! Yes the sex was most def. hot! :) It was amazing! :) GREAT JOB! :)

I just love the pairing name you came up with for these two. :lmfao It makes me laugh.

:yah
The sex was hot. I liked it. :weird
But just one thing, next time you write gay sex you might want to include some type of lubricant as well as stretching before they start having some real sex. There might be alittlelot of pain in the morning afterwards. :tehe: So make sure to include those two things next time. They're vaguely important to gay sex. :XD
It could have been a little more detailed as well... I'm focusing too much on the sex, aren't I? Sorry. :tehe:

This story was really well written. I didn't see any mistakes and it seems like you've got good grammar and spelling.

Overall, good job.

You do good work in about two hours. Why must you be so good at one-shots?