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  • Gainesified.

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    pinkgrenade:
    This might sound dumb, but are you gonna go any further with this or leave it the way it is? I can't tell.

    But I do like it - I can see the dreamlike quality within the text. It makes me wonder what was actually part of your dream...
    No. The story is completed. But I'm glad you enjoyed it, nonetheless. :brightside:
    July 26th, 2009 at 05:20am
  • pinkgrenade

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    This might sound dumb, but are you gonna go any further with this or leave it the way it is? I can't tell.

    But I do like it - I can see the dreamlike quality within the text. It makes me wonder what was actually part of your dream...
    July 26th, 2009 at 05:08am
  • perksofbeinggatsby

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    This is really well written. I love it. Good job :)

    xXxXxX :~: Bridget :~: XxXxXx
    July 20th, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • Gainesified.

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    Here is where we can discuss all aspects of my story. Please remember that constructive criticism is welcomed with opened arms, but that negative comments will not be tolerated. Thank you for reading.
    July 20th, 2009 at 09:45pm
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