Chance Encounter in a Dreary Bar - Comments

pinkgrenade:

This might sound dumb, but are you gonna go any further with this or leave it the way it is? I can't tell.

But I do like it - I can see the dreamlike quality within the text. It makes me wonder what was actually part of your dream...

No. The story is completed. But I'm glad you enjoyed it, nonetheless. :brightside:

This might sound dumb, but are you gonna go any further with this or leave it the way it is? I can't tell.

But I do like it - I can see the dreamlike quality within the text. It makes me wonder what was actually part of your dream...

This is really well written. I love it. Good job :)

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