Well i'm enjoying it. I think you're losing readers because they become impatient. Please keep writing. There are some of us that are enjoying the story.
haven't started reading yet just putting it ont word to read later. but i love the discription comparing it to a game of musical chairs.
also mis counting the people alive is hard. I marked the names at the front of my book and by 30 i was super lost and aload of the people hadn't even been introduced i had no clue what was going on.
When i finish I shall right a mega long comment for you. but as you know from reading the book it is difficult to read all in one go, it took me two weeks--and for me that is a long time. there were parts i just had to put the book down and try not to throw up.
also have you seen br2? it's awesome i loved it. not as good as the first but different but shuya's back and as i am in love with Tatsuya Fujiwara it was heaven
great updates, i have no idea how you keep track of all the dead and alive, but great job on that! i went out like a champ, so i dont mind being dead. In fact, the role you gave me, kinda intermingles with that one guy...ugh..the guy who helps the dude and one chick in the hut, the guy who says his dad is a doctor and keeps changing his story...? Ugh...i can't remember his name, but awesome job! You look nice too