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  • NightNight

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    I love drama so I LOVE this!
    September 7th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • Pineapplez

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    In future stories please capitalize your I's. It is should be "I did this," not "i did this." Always capitalize I when using it as a personal pronoun please. I find it annoying and it often causes to not read a story. I'm sorry if that offends you, I don't mean to be offensive at all. Just some constructive criticism. I'm a big fan of people putting effort into the quality of their writing.
    January 17th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    AND ONE MROE THING.
    If you ever plan on writing a story involving a kid and you need help with personalities, I'm here for you!
    Haha. =D
    August 13th, 2009 at 01:52am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    OH YES! And page ownage!! lol...
    But seriously, that was a very, very cute story.
    You're good at writing short stories!
    =D
    August 13th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    VERY cute ending, I liked it a lot. =DD
    August 13th, 2009 at 01:48am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Ok....now that I put my tissue down.......let's have another sequel or another story....still waiting.....I loved this so much.
    August 13th, 2009 at 12:22am
  • XxVengeancexX

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    You Did it again!!! You Made Me Cry!!! But this time I was Happy too Cry I Loved it!!!
    August 13th, 2009 at 12:11am
  • shannxloves

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    sorry aha. i dont relle know how 6 year olds talk cuz i dont have any younger siblings. lol.
    wow..im terrible at math! aha..thank you!!
    August 8th, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    I LOVE THIS STORY!!
    But they should be 21, not 19.... That threw me off a few times....
    haha
    And oh, I don't think 6 year olds really talk like that....
    I have quite a few little sisters and they stopped talking like that when they were two...
    haha
    But this is an amazing story.
    =D
    I really like it!! *subscribes*
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:52am
  • ooooo

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    OH MY GOD!!!! the last chapter was... wow, i can't wait till the next chapter!!!!
    August 7th, 2009 at 09:30pm
  • ooooo

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    it's very good, good job, keep it up :D
    August 7th, 2009 at 08:34pm
  • Loki;;

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    Phil? Biological father?
    Fo'realz?!
    I can honestly say I did not see that one coming.
    August 7th, 2009 at 02:54pm
  • xXxAlicexXx

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    no...no....no!!!
    in a good way.
    WAIT!!
    does her mum know??? does ha know??? im sooooooooooo lost and confused!!!!!! not good.....
    wow.................................................................
    soon???
    i know......... i look this story..........
    August 7th, 2009 at 11:24am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    OH HOLY HECK!~I need another update like yesterday. I so love this. I needed two boxes of tissue for this one. I so love it.......
    August 7th, 2009 at 08:29am
  • XxVengeancexX

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    Bitch you Made Me Cry!!!! I Cried So Hard.........Ugh I Cat see anything Right Now I'm Crying So Hard
    August 7th, 2009 at 06:57am
  • xXxAlicexXx

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    oh wow...oh wow...oh wow......
    oh my god....
    i...what.....wait....yes!!!!
    love it!!!
    more soon i hope!!!!!!
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • Loki;;

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    I lurrrrrv it so farrrr. =]
    Keep it up!
    =D
    August 5th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Hehehehehehehehehehe!!!!!! Finally. Does this mean I can pack her stuff and send her to Bill now?LOL I love this book.
    August 5th, 2009 at 06:04am
  • XxVengeancexX

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    LOVE IT SO MUCH
    August 1st, 2009 at 06:31am
  • Mrs Synyster Gates

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    Tears!!!!! Totally in tears. I so love this. Please update again soon.
    July 31st, 2009 at 09:29pm
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