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  • LoveChange

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    I love this, can't wait for the next update :)
    January 6th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • underestimatedweirdo

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    I love this!!!
    October 16th, 2011 at 10:13pm
  • bellastar03

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    Really good :)
    August 20th, 2011 at 07:49pm
  • kassipoola

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    tell me why must this stop?? i like it like alot alot alot!!! -Subscribes-
    July 21st, 2011 at 07:04am
  • celestial_royalty

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    hey~ I noticed that throughout the story, thoughts are not distinguished from the general writing. why don't you use italics, or single quotes? it would help the reader read more efficiently
    July 20th, 2011 at 10:47am
  • skyerocket.

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    I love this story and the update.
    Update soon, okay?
    July 20th, 2011 at 03:23am
  • The Mini Monster

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    So, I read this story, beginning to end.
    And I really like it.
    I hope you plan to finish it.
    I'm excited to see what you have planned.
    July 18th, 2011 at 11:28am
  • celestial_royalty

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    I don't like this creeper Lucius :/
    July 18th, 2011 at 06:32am
  • underestimatedweirdo

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    This is so awesome update!!!!!!!!
    July 17th, 2011 at 01:43pm
  • liarliarpantsonfire

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    loved the update! Please update soon (:
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    his dad's crazy man.
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:27pm
  • Carry On Winchester

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    aw they love each other but its just so confusing. :( and i cant believe she joined the Dark Lord!
    July 15th, 2011 at 11:33am
  • Harley.Quinn

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    I forgot i was even freaking in this story! I'm epic! Can I be in some more? Can I be a badass? as in, like, a good way?
    March 20th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • Angel4Eva16

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    Ooooo I just read the first one and all of what u have on this story on recommendation from a friend! Update!!! Aysap!!!! :)
    January 19th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • chocolate frog.

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    Great :D
    Pleeease update your story! I didn't know you made a sequel till about 20 minutes ago, but I love it already (:
    what' alice's prophecy? Please write more xD
    August 18th, 2010 at 08:36pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    ch1- yay SIRIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ch3- hehe draaaaaaaaaaaaama.
    ch5- alice *snort* possesed by voldemort *cough* has extra power*snicker* turns Draco on OH MY!
    ch7- aww james, just like her father. warms my heart. <3
    ch9- quite dull. (wow, I've been commenting all the odd chapters and I JUST noticed. I'm slow TnT)
    ch14- ooooooooh buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurn. ^.^
    ch16- MOTEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!! (sorry I need to stop the lame american terms)
    ch18- unexpected, but a little dull. more action than usual, i know, but i expected more. u can do it.
    March 5th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • Gryffindork -_-

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    AWESOME! POOR ALICE!!!!!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 05:22am
  • liarliarpantsonfire

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    hey, sorry for not commenting for a while. ive been pretty busy lol.

    Anyway, loved the updates! :D
    please update soon! :D
    August 12th, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • Everdeen14

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    I really like this series. :D I hope you continue to write more. XD I have a Camille too! lol
    August 9th, 2009 at 02:19am
  • Harley.Quinn

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    good. I'm still a good guy...
    August 8th, 2009 at 02:07am