The Wizard of Hurt - Comments

I absolutely adored this. It clearly displayed one of the most despised of human emotions, pain, while incorporating a sort of whimsical undertone that one would hope to expect from the Wizard of Oz. In this short story, you've made me want to laugh, cry, love , and be loved in every way possible. Very descriptive, and a job well done.

That was beautiful.

You captured the longing, the jealousy, and the feelings of illness all in one story. With the occasional light heartedness that shows signs of hope and that the feeling of being the "tin man" would some day pass.

I never noticed that line, but it made me think a lot.
Was a great little story and I could feel the pain.
No more pain?