The ending chapter was just as I thought! They ended up together and he told her that he loved her, which is a big thing for Ryan;obviously. Anyway, the chapter ended perfectly and I loved how you tied the title into the ending sentence. That was great. Oh, and a sequel would diffently be nice. You know, so we can know about their new relationship a little bit more. Or something like that. Great story, fantastic ending. LOVED IT!
Hehe loved it! I think this story is well told and your a great writer, I don't usually read most stories all the way through. But also I think Ryan and Emma's story has nothing left to add to it. But I'll be sure to check out Maybel's story also! ;)
Well. I'm in love with the last chapter, even if I'm sad to see it come to an end. I hope that you do come up with a plotline for a sequel, I'm sure that it would do amazingly well.
I'm not really a hugs && cookies person. However, I will steal some of your skittles.(:
Perfect ending to a brilliant story. I loved it. You are an amazing writer and I will surely be continuing to read your work even when the time comes that I actually have to pay for it at a Bookstore and cue for ages to have you sign my copy. :D You're an incredible writer, keep up the good work.
dude, you're insane. i hope you become a famous author some day! you're writing is amazing, and you're my age, too. i cant even write that good. i've read most of you're stories already, and i love all of them! i hope you make a sequel to this. (:
its over, wow that was such a beautiful ending but i NEED more dont leave me hanging, hope there is a sequal, i absolutely love Emma 'n' i'm loving bloody fashion also ps the story was AMAZING keep up the good work
Awwwwwwww it's over. This was a really great story. I kinda wish I could have seen more of Ryan and Emma's relationship towards the end because they were only really together the last couple of chapters. Anyway really, really awesome story, sad that it's over though.